The Sky Angle by Aeden

The sky is white with snow coming out of it. This angle has a red coat and a red jacket. The angle is playing a trumpet with something on it. The angle is holding a stick with a star at the end of it. The star is shining bright. The dust is coming off the trumpet while it's moving. I can feel the glitter on the coat. I can smell the snow falling onto Earth. I can hear the angle flaping her wings. ---reprinted with permission from Aeden






Aeden's teacher had them take a holiday card and write descriptive phrases about it. Then they read their paragraphs out loud and the other students guessed which card the writer had. Since Aeden read it aloud no one knew that he had written angle instead of angel. :)